Thesis is very important for every paper because it explains why your audience will want to read the paper. Consider the following link http://patient.info/doctor/Hypnagogic-Hallucinations. Here, you see the details you need to mention in your thesis.
Generally, you may include the glimpses from your paper into the thesis: definition of hypnagogic or hypnopompic hallucinations; when they occur; the factors that cause them; and what can be done to help a person experiencing them.
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Find some arguments at first and then write a thesis.
What you have is a mess.
Start with a topic and then develop a research question. Do a research to answer it then. Find evidence and examples and assess them, proving their reliability. The best answer is a thesis, just adapt it and add supporting arguments.
Explain why other answers aren’t good enough.
Then write introduction and conclusion.
I consider that you are from the US. Then, you should write about something in this country. For instance, compare the system of elections then and now. What was the process and what is the process now?
Are there any differences, similarities? Besides, you can write about music and the availability of music. In the 1950s, people could listen to the music mostly via radios. Nowadays, there are thousands of methods.
Obesity impairs the normal functioning of the human body thus meets the definition of the disease. Moreover, it decreases the expectancy of human life.
You can make a strong argument that obesity is a disease.